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priyanka (39)

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too good Gautham!
u composed it?

har kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahi milta,kahin zameen,toh kahin aasmaan nahi milta
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wonderful.
where do ya ppl collect all these?
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Take a salute frm my side
main to padte padte ro gaya!
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That one was mailed to me by my frnd.
she said that she found that in her mom's diary......
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gr8 one man!
take a salute frm my side.

i promise a salute for everyone who correctly answers my question.
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hey gautham yaar it's a greatest one
i am very glad u ppl share these types of things here on this site

I am very very thankful to you for giving us such a gr8 poem

PLZ DONT RATE ME FOR MY ANSWERS,IF U WANT TO COMPLIMENT ME THEN JUST HELP ANY OTHER IN FUTURE AS I AM DOING IT NOW

FILL THE UNFORGIVING MINUTE WITH 60 SECONDS THEN THE LIFE WILL BE YOURS

The woods are lovely, dark &deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep
-Robert Frost
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You 2 (Manasi and Gautham) are making this post absolutely a treat to read.

But I will pray that we meet at our goal(IIT)

All For That pink background behind my posts
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hey....mansi,,
u r really vry creative........n dis poem is vry awesome...
n hope u continue 2 write further n never stop
 
surbhi

surbhi mittal
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Manasi (3976)

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@ surbhi
thanx surbhi :)... but i hav already given up this... ab i cant even write 2 lines..... this was the last one :)
@ subhayan
thanx....nd even i wish so subhayan

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Challenges are High, Dreams r New..
The World out thr is waiting for U !!
Dare to dream, Dare to Try..
No Goal is distant, no Star is too high !!!
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MUKUL AGARWAL (34)

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HEY!MANASI OUTSTANDING poem
1st one[inhindi] is fantastic,salute to u as being it's ur original is so soulful..
it could be undestood only by emotional people
acc. to me,philosophy looks more beautiful & revealing in hindi,salute for that poem!!
i m also interested in philosophy very much..
i v aso made 3 lines just now,:
' Naa jaane is dard-bhari zindhagi mein kismat ne kitne karvatein li,
kitne khel khelein,aur kitne nahin,,
zingagi apne modh par chal rahi hai,mein apne par,
lekin jab kismat ko mere khel pe daya aagayi ,
meri kismat rang leke aagayi!!'
 
 
 

there is REASON behind every reason

JO HOTA HAI ACCHE KE LIYE HOTA HAI
GOIN BAD IS NOT GOOD BUT HAVIN BAD IS GOOD ALWAYZ AT THE END........................................................
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nice one mukul....

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Challenges are High, Dreams r New..
The World out thr is waiting for U !!
Dare to dream, Dare to Try..
No Goal is distant, no Star is too high !!!
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not mine, but still nice
         If You Have A Dream Don't wait for some distant day to come,
   it may be too late before you've even begun.
Not everyone will agree with all you decide.
Be true to yourself first and foremost.
The only important thing in life is what you do
with the time you spend here on earth.
Don't be afraid to follow your desires,
they are not silly nor selfish.
Take the time and do what makes you feel alive.
Leave your fears and regrets in the past,
for this is where they belong.
Don't cloud today with things that can't be undone.
You have no more control over yesterday or tomorrow,
than you do the raging of your passions.
Do not quiet these dreams nor quench your desires.
For if you do, your journey is ended.
You have only today to begin anew and follow your dreams.
For in the end all we have are our memories.
When the twilight comes to us, let there be,
No excuses, no explanations, no regrets!

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Challenges are High, Dreams r New..
The World out thr is waiting for U !!
Dare to dream, Dare to Try..
No Goal is distant, no Star is too high !!!
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LORD of D Last Bench (936)

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I got inspiration from you now get inspiration from my first creation

Believe in yourself?
in the power you have
to control your own life
day by day.
Believe in the strength
that you have deep inside
and your faith will help
show you the way.

Believe in tomorrow
and what it will bring,
let a hopeful heart
carry you through
for things will work out
if you trust and believe
there?s no limit
to what you can do!

Please tell if there is scope for some improvement

All For That pink background behind my posts
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Manasi (3976)

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a real gud work subhayan!!!!!!!!!!

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Challenges are High, Dreams r New..
The World out thr is waiting for U !!
Dare to dream, Dare to Try..
No Goal is distant, no Star is too high !!!
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JEETNA MERI JIDD NAHIN, MERI AADAT HAIN......... (1426)

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hey mansi.............as usually she writes superb.........and shubayan is also superb..............................
AS everybody is saying..................... inspirational  thoughts so why should i be behind................... it is 4 all intellectual people...........
1)
zindagi ki asli udan abhi baki hai...........
 
apne erado ka imtehan abhi baaki hai...................
 
abhi to naapi hai mutthi bhar zameen..............................
 
aage abhi saara AASMAN baaki hai.......................................
 
and next one for all those who belive  in GOD..
 
2)
wHEN GOD solves ur prblms u have faith in his abilities.....................
 
but........................
when he doesnt solve ur prblms.......................
 
remember
he has faith in your abilities.................................
 
okkkkkkkkkkkk
amd my fav....... inspirational sentence..........(everybody knows)...................
 
"BELIEVE IN URSELF BCOZ I BELIEVE IN U".............
 
sacchi mein................
 
thanks.....................
 

BELIEVE IN URSELF.....BECAUSE I BELIEVE IN U..............
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Some lines for Manasi

Tum jo dekhna chahte ho inki udaan ko
To thoda aur uncha karo is asmaan ko

All For That pink background behind my posts
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hindi poem
sundar aasaman par ghumadate jo badal
fail gaya nabh tak jaise dharti ma ka aanchal
bund bund se unse tapkta amrat
us madhuras ka pan karke ho gaya man sukrat
koyal gan karke rijha rahi hai
madhur kandh se samjha rahi hai
aa gayi hai suhavani varsha
dekhkar jise man harsha
thodi thodi dhup ne bada diya aanand
mast mast jhumne lage sab aanand
sapt rango ka indradhanush ab aya
man mayur nache jaise dharti par swarg aya
ghatao ka lagaya ambar ne kajal
sundar aasaman par ghumadate jo badal
plz reply me if u like this!

art of living:
dont make frnds.
if made,dont go close to them.
if gone,dont like them.
if liked,dont trust them.
if trusted,then
DONT EVER LEAVE THEM................
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Himanshu (9616)

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atlast u posted them !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I always like to walk in rain as no one can see me crying there :(
frnds are like diamonds , if u hit them , they don't break but they slip frm ur hands
-----It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what you are not.----
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A bit sad one.......
 
Shayad unko samajh na aaya 
kya thi meri mann ki baat.....
dekh kinara utar gaye wo,
lehron se lade hum saari raat....
saath rahe sab rishte naate,
bhatke mann bas saari raat...
peele pad gaye unke kagaz,
nayi rahi unki har baat...
unki raatein ho gayi chotti,
lambi reh gayi meri raat..
sunte aaye sab hi ke kisse,
kaise kahein hum apni baat....
pathron se bhi phoote jharane, meri suni jab saari raat..

nupur..
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wah wah !!!!!!!!
main to kehta hun ki tum iit de k kya karoge tum sab poet ban jao

accha nupur i m posting that poem tooo!!!!!

monsoon rain or summer heat
u r the reason y i breathe
tell me dear wat is sweet
is that u or ur heart that beats!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is to all my frnz now

I always like to walk in rain as no one can see me crying there :(
frnds are like diamonds , if u hit them , they don't break but they slip frm ur hands
-----It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what you are not.----
*****wen love and skill work together--expect a masterpiece*****






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